Kia Ora,
In the past few days everyone in our class have been working on a batman story. I have been writing sentences and writing a little bit about the story. This writing is my conflict. I haven’t finished yet so please give me ideas or feedback. I hope you like it.
Write 6 sentences that detail who the story is about, where the story is set, what problem/conflict happens in the story, how they handle the problem, how the problem is solved and how the characters change.
| Sentence 1
(describe your character) |
Batman has a cat named Milly. Batman lives in a secret bunker. |
| Sentence 2
(describe the scene) |
They are in Auckland city. |
| Sentence 3
(Conflict – what is the problem?) |
The Mailman delivers bombs to Batman’s Bunker. |
| Sentence 4
(Conflict – how does your character feel?) |
Batman feels worried, nervous and smart. |
| Sentence 5
(resolution – how is the problem solved?) |
The cat thinks to be kind to the mailman But Batman disagrees. |
| Sentence 6
(how characters have changed) |
Batman learns that you should be kind to someone even if they are not being kind to you. |
Follow up activity
| Describe in detail the quest or challenge the hero is facing.
Challenge – Use this sentence in your writing Ring ring…Ring ring…Ring ring… There was a call from the phonebox on the corner… |
| Ring ring…Ring ring…Ring ring…There was a call from the phonebox on the corner…Batman slowly went to answer it trying to stay cool. Ring ring… Batman answered “Hello?” said Batman “Hi we need your help!! The Mailman is delivering bombs to everyone!” Exclaimed the voice on the other end of the line. “Alright,” said Batman. Where are you?” “I am at my work in the city” said the voice, ok I am on my way” said Batman. Batman jumped into his Batmobile and drove to the city. He hopped out of his Batmobile and saw the mailman. STOP RIGHT THERE |